ricky891217's Guard Application

[Kunvoi]

I like your intentions, but I believe that you have falseness in this application. You are 15/16? Pardon me for not believing that. Your lack of word choices and the grammar! The grammar! You have so many cut off sentences, and floating punctuation. You are also missing something critical. I think the effort was there, but it stayed only within this post. I don't believe you took the time to read all the rules. Please edit this application AFTER you have read all the rules. Overall, this time in my judgement would be rated a -1.