Nov 11th, 2015, 03:08 PM
(Nov 11th, 2015, 02:40 PM)zs471 link Wrote: "Not a lot of guards I have seen are inactive and plus the i want to help community of this server and help new people since the last time I was on the server."
'Not a lot of guards I have seen are inactive'
So there are a lot of active guards?
'and plus the i want to help community of this server'
I can only assume he means he wants to help the community but this is just terrible, how could he possible think this is right?
'and help new people since the last time I was on the server.'
I have no clue, something about helping new people since he's last joined the server? That makes no sense.
"I have been on this server and really wanted to be the guard for a long time."
This isn't that bad, but does require a bit of time to understand, at first he says he's been on the server (haven't we all?) then he says he wanted to be THE guard for a long time, I'll accept he probably didn't mean to put 'the' there.
"I am a honest, nice, very mature person to help any of the CDGS community newcomers."
Worded abnormally, buy this part makes sense.
"I have learned a lot of things on this server and I would like to help and grow the server."
This last sentence is fine.
There's a breakdown of what I read.
See it's a lot easier to understand when you're reading it all at once and not broken down though reading it broken down I see what you mean.
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