NintendoTurtle's Guard Application
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"Not a lot of guards I have seen are inactive and plus the i want to help community of this server and help new people since the last time I was on the server."

'Not a lot of guards I have seen are inactive'
So there are a lot of active guards?

'and plus the i want to help community of this server'
I can only assume he means he wants to help the community but this is just terrible, how could he possible think this is right?

'and help new people since the last time I was on the server.'
I have no clue, something about helping new people since he's last joined the server? That makes no sense.

"I have been on this server and really wanted to be the guard for a long time."
This isn't that bad, but does require a bit of time to understand, at first he says he's been on the server (haven't we all?) then he says he wanted to be THE guard for a long time, I'll accept he probably didn't mean to put 'the' there.

"I am a honest, nice, very mature person to help any of the CDGS community newcomers."
Worded abnormally, buy this part makes sense.

"I have learned a lot of things on this server and I would like to help and grow the server."
This last sentence is fine.

There's a breakdown of what I read.

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NintendoTurtle's Guard Application - by mudturtle - Nov 6th, 2015, 09:36 PM
Re: NintendoTurtle's Guard Application - by TySun - Nov 7th, 2015, 08:32 AM
Re: NintendoTurtle's Guard Application - by zs471 - Nov 10th, 2015, 06:36 PM
Re: NintendoTurtle's Guard Application - by DaNate - Nov 10th, 2015, 07:37 PM
Re: NintendoTurtle's Guard Application - by zs471 - Nov 11th, 2015, 08:27 AM
Re: NintendoTurtle's Guard Application - by zs471 - Nov 11th, 2015, 01:43 PM
Re: NintendoTurtle's Guard Application - by zs471 - Nov 11th, 2015, 02:40 PM
Re: NintendoTurtle's Guard Application - by mudturtle - Nov 11th, 2015, 03:17 PM
Re: NintendoTurtle's Guard Application - by DaNate - Nov 11th, 2015, 04:55 PM
Re: NintendoTurtle's Guard Application - by cougarboy - Nov 11th, 2015, 07:45 PM

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