Jun 5th, 2014, 12:50 PM
just stating the obvious, but your application sucks.
1: we dont know whenever you are free, you need to put specific days and/or hours. Just saying whenever you have freetime doesnt give the staff anything to go off of. They ask because they want to know when you can be on, so they can try to organize a schedule.
2: Try to get to Free rank first. Since you're E, you obviously just joined recently, and its better if you have been playing for a good amount of time, and know more about the server. Also I hardly ever see you on, this might just be my observation, but you might want to be more active. Being active is a big responsibility for a guard.
3: You obviously didnt read the rules, otherwise you wouldve: #1: put in a response when it asks you if you read the rules, #2: you wouldve put in the key phrase that all applications require, and that is stated clearly in the guard rules. If you want to be a guard, read the dam rules.
4: You also need to have much more content in the last section ("Why should we pick you to be our next guard?"). The first thing you said in that section was "yes.", which makes absolutely no sense. Also you need to give more reasons why you would be a good guard, and why they need you. You barely said anything worthy of being accepted. This is probably the most important section, so its where you need to put most of your effort into.
5: You also have a couple different format mistakes. First, your subject title is wrong, and in the rules (which you obviously didnt read very well at all) it clearly states the correct way to make your subject title. This, along with not putting in the key phrase, is sure to earn you a denial. Also if you payed attention to the rules more, and how the forums itself works, you would be able to make a better application, and make it nice and neat.
In conclusion, I can tell you right now that this app will most likely not be accepted. I would advise you to re-read the rules, thoroughly and carefully, learn more about the forums, get more experience on the server, and make a better application. Then, you may have a chance at getting guard.
1: we dont know whenever you are free, you need to put specific days and/or hours. Just saying whenever you have freetime doesnt give the staff anything to go off of. They ask because they want to know when you can be on, so they can try to organize a schedule.
2: Try to get to Free rank first. Since you're E, you obviously just joined recently, and its better if you have been playing for a good amount of time, and know more about the server. Also I hardly ever see you on, this might just be my observation, but you might want to be more active. Being active is a big responsibility for a guard.
3: You obviously didnt read the rules, otherwise you wouldve: #1: put in a response when it asks you if you read the rules, #2: you wouldve put in the key phrase that all applications require, and that is stated clearly in the guard rules. If you want to be a guard, read the dam rules.
4: You also need to have much more content in the last section ("Why should we pick you to be our next guard?"). The first thing you said in that section was "yes.", which makes absolutely no sense. Also you need to give more reasons why you would be a good guard, and why they need you. You barely said anything worthy of being accepted. This is probably the most important section, so its where you need to put most of your effort into.
5: You also have a couple different format mistakes. First, your subject title is wrong, and in the rules (which you obviously didnt read very well at all) it clearly states the correct way to make your subject title. This, along with not putting in the key phrase, is sure to earn you a denial. Also if you payed attention to the rules more, and how the forums itself works, you would be able to make a better application, and make it nice and neat.
In conclusion, I can tell you right now that this app will most likely not be accepted. I would advise you to re-read the rules, thoroughly and carefully, learn more about the forums, get more experience on the server, and make a better application. Then, you may have a chance at getting guard.