Some things I noticed @Zeedin or Silas
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Not meant to be a dick or anything but I noticed some things while reading www.cdgs.net

Should be sneak not seek
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Should be Ever not every
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Not sure if that's how you spell bread or not but thought I'd point it out
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Should be too easy not to easy
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Servers not severs
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I noticed a couple grammar mistakes but I won't point them out as to not be a dick head.

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Thanks if we see any more please point them out. #EngineerNoSpellGood

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Found some more little details if you want.

Could be 2 different sentences or you could just put a comma after there.
"Ever wonder what everything does and why it's there?"
Here is a little run down of each server."
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After bread and butter of CDGS there should be either a comma or a period starting a new sentence.
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