MasterScare's Gaurd Application

[MasterScare]

What is your IGN? MasterScare

How old are you as of now? 12 (13 in 6 months)

What is your current playtime on the server? (/playtime) 83.4 Hours

When can you play on MCP? I can play from 3pm- 9pm Weekdays 9am - 10pm (this is UK time)

What is your timezone? GMT (UK time)

What is your rank on the server? Free

Do you have any experience with other prison servers? No this will be my first time however I'm a fast Lerner

Do you have any experience with guarding? Give a list of servers and your guard rank (IP if possible). No i don't have any experience

Have you read both the guard rules and the prisoner rules, even the ones in the info room? Yes i have I understand what to do when. I have read all the rules.

Why should we pick you to be our next guard? Because i said I'm going to steal The Declaration of Independence. I also believe that I'm very friendly person, i always help new player when they join, i won't play the  favourites game and i will always obey the rules. I also believe that there are not many guard which are from the uk  so i think this will be a great opportunity. I know i already applied and got rejected  however this has been the my favourite server i have ever played on and i would love it if i could become a staff on this server. Thanks for listening.

[cougarboy]

The number of guard apps show that you are determined  to get guard, but you have way too many, and in each application you usually say the same stuff. That just my opinion, even though I don't play much. I'd change the way you make your applications and do them less frequently. You have initiative but your app doesn't show it. -1

[MasterScare]

You are right i am determined to be a staff member and i do say the same thing again maybe i will change that if i get rejected also i only made 3 applications howvere in some i have made errors and had to repost them

[WIZFIZZER]

i guess this is ok

[YoungLiLSandwich]

I don't really do the plus one or minus one for applications, because I don't think it's nice.  Instead I'd like to offer some criticism and helpful advice.

[YoungLiLSandwich]

Sorry I hit post on accident and forgot to add the rest of what I was trying to say :l                                                                                                                                                                                ...Instead I'd like to offer some criticism and helpful advice.  First of all, don't post too many guard applications in such a rapid succession, give it some time.  Secondly, if you really want to make sure to show that you are dedicated, make sure to put more time into your application and check it for grammatical errors and spelling.  That's one way to show you are actually mature enough for such a position.  Anyways,  hopefully you'll take my advice to heart, and I wish you luck in the future.   Oh and always try to offer something that makes you seem completely unique and that you may be needed for this position, not just the same old stuff you normally see in applications.